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carpet

Carpet
Carpet is the major exports of Iran which is the fantastic art of Iranian people that made of wool, silk or similar material.
The best carpet of Iran make in Tabriz. Kashan, Naein, Esfahan and Qum.
Many years ago the model of carpet was hand-made, but now carpet has two model hand- made and machine-hand.
Today China and Belgium make machine- made carpet such as hand -made carpet of Iran. I mean they make in a very careful and detailed way, as thin as a hand- made carpet of Iran.
Ezazi

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  1. Dear Fatemeh:
    There is some points that is better to be concerned;
    1."that make of wool,…" is better to be "that is made of …"
    2.In the second sentence, the verb should be passive.

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  2. Dear.
    Thank you very much for correct me.
    Please do again if I am wrong.
    Regards

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