۱۳۸۹ فروردین ۶, جمعه
Registration process at a univesity
Registration process at a university has changed for better. Students now use internet and it solves many problems,because in the past registration process was a time consuming task for both students and univesities ,but this system now causes reduction of human workers and reduction of human 's fault and also it saves our time.Using internet has become very useful ,especially for universities with many users.
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Dear Elahe:
پاسخحذفyou sure did a good job,in this way every on can convey their own idea to others.The use of 'a' in first sentence is not appropriate to the text, though.
Besides, you can use some other connectors instead of 'and'&'because' to make your writing more absorbing.